First of all, I want to thank my parents for bringing me into this world.
首先,我想感谢我的父母把我带到这个世界。
I'm afraid I can't agree with you. That's a good way of giving information, but it's not a good way of persuading people. For one thing, it's boring, and people aren't going to read an ad that looks boring. For another thing, one computer looks very like